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It is hot, even at 8 p.m., even with the sun dipping, temperature still in the high 80s.

She is walking. She catches my eye.

I turn the car around, and in a moment am behind her.

She wants a ride home, perhaps more.

I tell her the ride would be fine, but nothing else.

I glance at her, around 20, fat rolls above her shorts, some insect bites, scabs from others on her thighs and arms. Just-out-of-high-school face, brown hair.

“A guy owes me a twenty. Maybe he has the money, maybe he’ll give me more. So drop me there. If he’s not there, then take me by my house.”

Two blocks and we’re there, a Quonset hut. A neighborhood repair shop.

She runs from the car past junked cars and trucks to the back of Quonset, and then comes back.

“He’s there, with the money, and with a chance for more. So thanks. Oh. I forgot my cigarettes,” and she reaches near the passenger seat and gets the pack. She misses a cigarette on the seat.

Before I drive off, I see go into the Quonset. The sun has dipped more; the sky is orange. The temperature has dropped a degree.

Cigarette anyone?

And in the Quonset, it must be broiling under the tin and aluminum roofing ….

Eugene “Gene” Novogrodsky, late June 2011

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About Gene Novogrodsky

Eugene “Gene” Novogrodsky has lived in the Rio Grande Valley in Brownsville for 21 years. He is a co-founder of the Narciso Maritinez Cultural Arts Center Writers Forum in San Benito. He says he has rarely been published; he fears rejection! Instead he loves to read his work in Savory Perks, in the Writers forum, and the Valley International Poetry Festival events. What he enjoys most is reading to several friends, or even strangers in small groups. He is married to his friend and companion, Ruth E. Wagner, who is also a poet and craftsperson. He does write letters to both print and online publications and has been a good friend to Writers of the Rio Grande.